State of Essay 2

My essay 2 now needed to be revised isn't my greatest work.  It is probably not even close to the top, but I think for the topic and knowing how I write essays it's in OK shape.  I really use West's framework to look at the blog I was analyzing and I find what the identity of the bloggers is and I state that clearly.  Part I am having trouble with is connecting it all and that is something I will work on in my revisions.