Essay 1

Overall I think this first essay went really well for me.  Usually I always fall short of the length requirement and I found that this time I had no trouble with that.  I feel that this is because I analyzed and elaborated a lot more than I usually do.  That is something I struggle with, but with this essay I felt like it flowed easily.  My ideas laid out nice without hours and hours just thinking what the heck am I going to write about.